Cuttings, held together by a slightly rusted paper clip, fall from his copy of Penguin Modern Poets 9: Denise Levertov, Kenneth Rexroth, William Carlos Williams. (Penguin Books, 1967). They include a typed version of 'The Rainwalkers', and photocopies of 'February Evening in New York' and 'The Cold Spring', the second with a note in Max’s hand "comp[are] with Dickinson ‘The Bustle’." Was he taking a class or writing a review? Then this one page hand-written set of notes about poetic construction. Are they Max Richards’ own responses or his summary of things by Levertov collated from her writings for reference? Or a bit of both? Whatever the case, the page has the feel of a trouvée poem:
24-7-81
Denise Levertov
on non-traditional metrics
free verse: impulse to flow, avoidance of the
interruption of pattern
But ‘wellwrought’…? ‘organic form’ 19th c.
a term taken over by shampoo manufacturers!
‘exploratory form’ giving us process rather
than results
sonnets etc. have closure, may sound
anachronistic if not used ironically
the line break & the dynamics of
perception
& word choice
nonsyntactic
pauses
dance/song
rather than walk/statement
see
Valéry
indentation
too hesitations
many
epiphanies
effect
on ‘melody’
pitch
patterns combined with rhythmic patterns
fidelity
to experience
&
experiencing the experience
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